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After Gilbert had latched off of the tall German from the sudden surprise attack, he frowned as he saw him walking to the door.

“H-hey, where are you going? Don’t you miss the awesome that is me?” He asked hastily before he left.

Ludwig turned around with still a hint of a blush across his face and smiled a bit.

“I’m just going to make us some breakfast, you stay up here und I’ll be back up with the food.” He said reassuringly.

Once the blond headed down the stairs and towards the kitchen, the Prussian stood in their room with crossed arms and a childish pout on his pale face.

There was a spark that shone off in his eyes along with a trail of lust as his crimson orbs darkened. He quietly “Keseseses”ed down the flight of stairs before he stopped by the wall in the living room, next to the kitchen entrance.

As the albino laid his back against the wall, he peaked his head in the kitchen to see the
German with his back facing him as he was setting out the frying pan to cook with. A
sinister smirk played on his face the whole time as he slowly crept in the room to catch the German from behind.

Ludwig was still oblivious to what was about to come as he crouched down to grab the cooking spray in the lower cabinet.

The Prussian froze as he looked down at the squatting man with his perfectly shaped arse sticking out a bit from the position he was in.

‘Damn.’ He thought as he bit his lip hard, trying not to be tempted at grabbing the well-toned muscle.

The German went back up and began spraying the pan, but once his hand went towards the knob to turn the stove on, he felt something grab him from behind and wrap around his waist.

He sighed as he knew who it was.

“Bruder, I thought I told you to go wait for me back upstairs-”

“West let’s just cut to the chase, ja? We both know that you need me as much as I need you right now, und I won’t take no for an answer.” He whispered in his ear in a dark and serious tone.

Ludwig didn’t move an inch as he heard the trail of lust in the other’s voice. He gulped a little, slowly placing the can to the counter as he knew the albino was waiting for a reply back.

He took a deep, steady breath before he made his move.

“Then tell me this, East, why didn’t you just ask me in the first place, hm?” He asked him before turning around quickly to meet with him face-to-face.

The older brother looked up to him and his eyes widened to meet with a lust-filled German
that had the same sinister smirk as him from before. He let out a dark chuckle as he saw a hint of innocence in the other’s eyes.

Seeing as how the lust was burning in the man’s darkened cold blue eyes, he immediately leaned up slightly to give him a passionate kiss.

The German melted under the kiss a bit and deepened it more; wrapping one arm around the elder nation’s neck and the other around his waist.

Gilbert wrapped both his arms around the blonde’s waist and licked the bottom part of his lips, eagerly asking for entrance.

He grunted as he refused the albino’s request and kept his mouth tightly shut, but felt a bit nervous as he felt the other’s lips curve up into a devilish smirk.

The Prussian slowly slid his pale hand down to firmly squeeze on tall man’s ass which caused him to gasp. He took this moment to quickly enter his tongue in the open wet cavern to explore its vast regions.

Ludwig continued to fight back as he used his own tongue to battle with the albino’s, leaving them in a heated competition for dominance.

It was almost left a tie until Gilbert snuck up on him while he was taking quick break, and quickly gained his title as the dom.

His wet muscle began to explore every part of the other’s mouth, and he could feel him moan a bit as he soothingly ran over the German’s tongue.

The blond could feel himself being pushed up against the marble counter top when the
Prussian traveled down to his jaw line to give him butterfly kisses. He continued down to his neck, endlessly searching for that one spot that would send a sweet moan from the other.

“Ooh~ right there.” Ludwig moaned out as that one special spot on his neck was claimed by the older brother.

Gilbert gently sucked on it as he earned a few lesser moans from the tall man. He smirked triumphantly in his head at how awesome he was doing right now. Usually it would be his younger brother topping instead of him, but this time he gained the upper hand.

A shiver went up the German’s spine as he felt a cold hand trail up his back, and felt it slide around to meet with his chest.

The silver-haired man started to lightly pinch at one of the younger’s pink buds, making it pert by its cold touch.

Ludwig could feel himself start to harden from the sensitive parts of his body continuously being ravished by the other.

“E-er bruder? I-I think we should continue this in bedroom.” He stuttered out trying to hold in the endless moans that came out of his mouth.

“Aww, but I thought you were going to make breakfast for us. You know how much I love your special home-made wurst. Es schmeckt so gut~.”(1) He cooed out to him as he brushed the bulge in his pants against the other’s.

The German’s face turned immediate red. He pretty much got the message and grabbed the albino’s hand to lead him to the bedroom, covering the blush with his free hand.

Ha-ha, Luddy’s face turned as red as one of Toni’s tomatoes~.” The Prussian said mockingly as he got a kick out of seeing the once serious man become so easily embarrassed by his words. He picked up his pace up the stairs as he began to feel a bit uncomfortable from his pants feeling like they were tightening around him more and more around his nether regions.

Once the two had made it to their bedroom, they immediately locked their lips to one another and let their tongues dance with the sound of muffled moans.

Ludwig slipped off the albino’s black tee with ease while the other struggled a bit with unbuttoning the German’s sweaty work shirt that he kept on from when he arrived home. He was so tired at the time that he thought he would have changed it the next day.

The blond grew a bit impatient as he saw Gilbert still trying to free him of the stingy piece of fabric that clung onto his sweaty body. Hastily, he helped him by unbuttoning the rest and flung it to wherever it would land. He didn’t care about the clothes or anything at that moment, all he wanted was the man he had longed for over the few months he hasn’t seen him.

Both of them sighed a little from the cool air touching their pale muscular torsos and resumed in their little make-out fest.

Gilbert flipped him to the bottom as he hovered over top and went down to the German’s sweet spot he had once claimed.

The blonde moaned a bit at the attention he was getting in the sensitive area of his, but made a small whimper as his brother retracted from the skin all too soon.

“Ah-ah-ah~, now you have to actually earn your little rewards West.” The Prussian said in a teasing voice as he went to the drawer in the nightstand by Ludwig’s side of the bed. He rummaged blindly with just his sense of touch and found what he was looking for once he gripped onto something hard and leathery.

The younger brother already knew what he was looking for as he mentally facepalmed himself for telling him about it in the first place just before he left for America. Well…he actually ordered him not to, at all costs, go into that drawer, but he should have known his brother would never pay attention to his commands.

Gilbert made a dark chuckle as he examined the item he now held in his hands.

It was a riding crop, but not just any ordinary riding crop. This one was Ludwig’s favorite and most used riding crop that he even had his name etched onto in a fancy print.

The Prussian rubbed his arse a bit from the remembrance of the many times he had been stricken on by the kinky weapon, and slowly leaned down to have his lips brush against the other’s ear.

“Now…this’ll sting for a while, but I’ll be sure to give you plenty of incentives if you promise to be a gut boy und stay put.” He whispered to him seductively as he nibbled a bit on the soft piece of flesh, which made Ludwig putty in his hands as he quickly nodded.

A wicked smile grew on the albino’s pastel lips as he started to trace the tip of the crop along the German’s sides, causing the German to become even more anxious. He stopped to look up at the other’s face that had beads of sweat trailing down his temples.

“You know, I feel like I’m missing something here…this punishment of yours doesn’t feel like enough.” He said as he climbed off the bulky man to go in the drawer on
his side of the bed this time and immediately grabbed two more objects from the mysterious place.

Ludwig squint his eyes since the room was a bit too dark to see in from the curtains being closed, but wanted o investigate as he slowly began getting up. Just before he could, the silver-haired man quickly pushed him back down as he was on top again.

Gilbert ordered him to place his hands up in the air which confused the German very much so. That is until he felt something metal around his wrists cling onto him and wrapped behind the bed post so he had no escape.

“Um…bruder where’d you get the handcuffs?” He asked as he felt a blindfold being tied to his head to make his sense of sight futile.

“Bought’em.” The older simply replied back.

“When?”

“While you were gone~” He said as he leaned in to give him a quick peck to the nose and went back to grab the leather crop from behind.

The blonde was now rendered helpless as he could not see nor control his hands anymore, and could only rely on the few senses he had left with him, preferably hearing.

“Now, back to where we left off from, ja?” Gilbert asked as he twirled the crop around in his hand before striking it down on the German’s side, hard.

Ludwig yelped from the sting of pain he felt on the now burning piece of flesh that almost tore through, but did not bleed. He gritted his teeth in pain, but also how much his member was hardening from the small amount of pleasure that had aroused his sensitive skin right after it stung.

The blond continued to hear the cracks of the whip echo through his eardrums and always sent a mixture of a pained scream and a lustful moan from each time he had been hit again and again.

After the younger brother had been hit a numerous amount of times with the item had once used as his own, he began to pant a little from the over exhaust of strange noises that had erupted from his mouth. He sighed in relief from feeling the Prussian blow soft cool air against his sore red stomach and kissed lightly here and there.

“See? That wasn’t so bad, und now you get a treat for being such a gut boy~” The albino said as he began to gently graze his teeth around one of the German’s nipples, lightly pinching to other so it had some of the attention as well.

The blond smiled a bit and moaned in pleasure as he was being spoiled by the silver-haired man’s touch.

What he didn’t know was how his throbbing member was as hard as the Prussian’s who was in charge. Gilbert couldn’t stand Ludwig’s cute moans as he had rarely heard them before, and it had turned him on even more as his pants grew tighter and tighter by every sound. He continued to delicately suck on the pert buds as started to twirl his pink muscle around it, earning even more noises from the aroused German.

He knew he was ready and he began to slowly pull off the blond nation’s pants, gaining a sigh of relief from the other as he felt the tight material around his erection being pulled off.

The albino chuckled a bit at he saw the little tent pop up in the German’s blue boxers and was silenced as he heard the other growl a bit in annoyance. He shrugged it off as he began taking off the last piece of clothing off the other and blushed madly at what he saw, but also a bit jealous as how it was always bigger than his.

Ludwig’s breath hitched as he felt the older man kiss the tip of his erect member, and slowly trailing his tongue around it. He bit his lip as he didn't want to moan from the embarrassment he felt, but wanted more as he rattled his handcuffs from the tug if his wrists.

The Prussian smirked from this and moved his mouth more to deep throat what he can of the other’s large shaft. He brought attention to the untouched areas by moving his hand rapidly around it to create a heated friction.

The German couldn't handle it anymore as he was on the verge of release from his brother’s ongoing teasing around his extremely hard member, and let out all the held in moans. When he could feel himself about to come over, the albino let go of him all together.

“Nh…oh come on~” He said with a whine like he was a teased child.

“Nein…I’m not letting you cum before I do.” He said with a desperate pant as he immediately began tossing off his pants and boxers altogether, letting out a long sigh of release from getting some air down there.

Both of them were now completely naked and Gilbert began to stretch out the other’s legs
so he could have a better look to his back entrance, and for what was about to occur. He
slowly slipped in a finger to feel how tight he was and inserted a second to scissor him open a bit. He was already ignoring the German’s noises as he was more focused at preparing him a bit.

“B-bitte bruder…”

Please what, West?” The albino asked him back in a serious tone.

“I-I n-need you…now.” Ludwig said that was just above a whisper.

That’s all he need as he had already had the tip of him poking at the other’s entrance, and slowly shoved himself in until he couldn't fit anymore inside of him.

The blonde cringed a bit as he gritted his teeth from the few moments of pain, but still remembered that he was desperately in need of him and started bucking his hips.

Gilbert got the message and started pulling out until he was just about halfway, and slammed into him again. He could hear the other moan at he groaned a bit himself as well.

He continued the vigorous tempo as the top of his thighs collided with upper part of
Ludwig’s hamstrings and the sound of the skin slapping against each other echoed into the empty hallways.

The Prussian soon started to let out sweet moans as well and it wasn’t long before the two almost met their climax.

They screamed the other's name as they both released and Gilbert quickly slid out before he could release inside of his brother’s back entrance, not wanting to be nasty on him and let the juicy fluid spill over them instead.

“Thanks…” The German said as he felt the handcuffs beings released and removed his
blindfold with his now free hands. He cringed at the sight of his cut wrists from him trying to struggle out of them from before, but sighed as he tried shrugging it off.

“Your welcome und, sorry about that.” Gilbert said with a sheepish grin as he saw the damaged wrists.

Ludwig shook his head as he didn’t care about it and patted him the empty spot on the side of the bed. The other gladly accepted as he jumped next to him and pulled up the covers over them.

The blond sighed as he wrapped his one arm around the Prussian, pulling him closer to take in his exotic scent.

“Ok next time, I’m topping.”

“Eh, I’m fine with it.” He said with a small shrug as he still felt exhausted from trying to do most of the work. He traced a finger over his lover as he had one more thing on his mind. “So…do you think you can go make me that breakfast you promised~?” He asked sweetly.

The German facepalmed as he knew he couldn’t really move anytime soon and let out an irritated sigh.

“Hey.”

“Was?”  Ludwig asked in an annoyed voice.

Gilbert moved the other’s hand from his head as he leant up to kiss him.

“Ich liebe dich, bruder.” He cooed at him.

“Ich liebe dich auch.” The said with rolled eyes as he kissed back.
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What the heck did I just write!?:iconmegablushplz: oh yeah...the lemon I had to make form the lost bet-/shot
ALMOST FORGOT TO MENTION THIS IS MY FIRST LEMON TRHKNTRHLNSDKGSLGJSHGHH.....carry on.-.
And I even made Germany the Uke!!:icongermanyomgwtfplz:
Well its not bad since I love seeing him that way at times~:iconukegermanyplz: so sexeh...
I also added in a bit of BDSM because come on! They always have a riding crop in there somewhere!! XD

I'm sorry if the end seems a bit rushed but I wanted to finish this by the weekend so ajhbthvlrjhgvtrqskjgh;*mind is totally messed up after writing this*:icongermanypalmplz:

Don't you hate it when your mind is on one pairing but you heart lies with anohter~?:icongermanyispleasedplz: (It's such a bitch with my multitasking skills~)
Oh and I'll admit it, my pervy mind DID have a fun time with this as well~:icongermanydanceplz:

Well I sadly don't own the characters or the picture (source found in first part of story)
But I DO own the story (which I freakin worked my arsch off on btw T^T)

(1)Es schmeckt so gut - It tastes so good (Pfffft-):iconlaughingprussiaplz:
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~Mireka-chan96 Nov 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
OMG that was so!!I can't even----- :iconovariesplz: bravo for this wonderful fanfic :iconletmehugyouplz: and I wish to see Gilbert on the bottom the next time cause it will be more sexy~ :iconiggybrowsplz: Germancest for the way!!!!!!!!!!!
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*maxride97 Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks xD
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~Mireka-chan96 Nov 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome :iconprussiawinkplz:
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~girlnorwayX3 Nov 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
*drools* this... oh god..... i just licked my screen..! oh god oh god <3 <3 i love this! i seriously need more of these kinds of fanfics :la: :la:
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*maxride97 Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't worry I'll try to make things like this in the near future~
Soon...
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~girlnorwayX3 Nov 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thank yooooooooouuuuu!!!!!!!! I love you!!!! >w<
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*maxride97 Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:3
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~girlnorwayX3 Nov 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
>w<
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~DareToBeDaring Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
There go my ovaries. :iconspain-nosebleed:
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~Doitsu-The-Epic Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I couldn't have said it better. :iconfangasmplz:
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